Since you have such a wonderful book that has already helped me, I'd like to give back with two suggestions for the next revision. Here's the second:
It works well to have a circled "X" next to all the bad examples. I suggest that you take this further and label each bad example individually, and also have a checkmark next to the good examples. I've attached an illustration of this.
I hope that is useful.
7 years 7 months ago
05/03/2016 - 11:39am
Definitely useful! I like this suggestion a lot.